Sunday, 19 May 2013

Story Of The Day: Slipping Away

Our next 'Story of the Day' is Slipping Away by Ruegirl which has been recommended by LSF member, Opb

"This short piece has a lyricism probably unmatched on these shelves, with internal rhymes tripping over the rhythm formed by the pacing and with alliteration littering the phrases.

The anguish in the narrator's soul is in counterpoint to the smoothness of prose and we are left seeing lurid a visceral need for this strange thing we do, and that stripped from its pretence and play there lies at the heart of a spanking pain, so often to be avoided, but here yearned for with a desperate passion as the solution which can hold the soul from the danger stated in the title.

A woman begins to let her mind slip away into the zone, the special place where she yearns, not for the trivial spankings, but for the purity of real harsh pain.

synopsis by flopsybunny

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